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Talulla

Hello everyone, Winnie Griggs here. I’m so excited - the release day for Talulla, the ninth book in the multi-author Love Train series, is almost here - it releases on August 1st.

As I posted last month, multi-author projects are always fun. The chance to bounce ideas off of each other and do some collective worldbuilding, even when the books are standalone, brings an extra layer of excitement to a project. One of my contributions to the worldbuilding aspect was to speak to a curator at a railroad museum and get a copy of a timetable that showed travel times and stops along the Union Pacific route in the 1870s. Others dug out information on Pullman cars, dining options, how sleeper berths were set-up and stored away and many other little details that went into making the train travel portion of our stories as realistic as possible.

As for the stories themselves, other than details about wordcount and other administrative issues, each of the ten participating authors were given the following set-up for the books:    

  • The books will all be standalone
  • Each story will have the hero and heroine encountering each other while traveling on a Union Pacific train, engine number 1216. The train travel will happen on page for at least part of the story.
  • The time frame will be 1869 or later.
  • A matchmaking conductor will be featured in each book. (character sketch provided).

Given these identical parameters, it was really interesting to see how VERY differently each story turned out. 

When I started brainstorming the story for my book, Talulla, I started by reading through my idea file.  You know, that place where an author stores those ‘someday’ ideas, snippets of character sketches, plot points, what-ifs that are intriguing enough to grab your attention, but not fully formed enough to earn a story just yet. And the one that tugged at me was an idea I had pitched to my editor in my early days of writing for LIH. It was rejected, and rightly so, it wasn’t developed enough at the time. But that was over a dozen years ago and with the advantage of a little more experience under my belt I could see the weak spots and figure out how best to rework it.

I was very excited to be able to finally breathe new life into this story and get it ‘out there’ in the world at large. I know this may sound silly, but whenever I develop a story to the point of having a proposal pulled together, I get invested in the characters and feel I’m letting them down if I don’t get the story written.

 

Here’s an excerpt. For context, Tally and Max were childhood friends but a tragic accident that resulted in the death of her brother changed all that. She went away to boarding school and it’s been twelve years since they’ve seen each other. Max is now a widowed father and he and his seven-year-old daughter Bonnie are traveling home on a train in the crowded coach car when Bonnie falls prey to travel sickness. The conductor finds a passenger with extra seating in her Pullman section who agrees to share her space with the sick child. Here is how the first meeting goes.

 

A split second before Henry made the introductions, recognition kicked Max in the gut. Tally!

Henry waved to the woman. “Mr. Maxwell Wallace, this is Miss Talulla Alden. Miss Alden, this is Mr. Maxwell Wallace and his daughter Bonnie.”

Max saw her stiffen, as he was certain he had. He gave a short nod. “Tally.”

“Max?” Her tone conveyed shock, as if she’d just bitten into something that was unexpectedly sour.

Henry looked from one to the other of them in obvious delight. “So you two know each other?”

Max nodded. “We do. Or at least we did, many years ago.” Tally Alden—the flesh and blood reminder of one of the lowest moments and biggest regrets of his life. No wonder she’d seemed familiar out there on the platform and that he’d thought of her earlier.

The conductor rocked back on his heels looking very pleased with himself. “Well this is excellent. You can get reacquainted and there won’t be any of that awkwardness strangers experience when meeting each other for the first time.”

Max barely managed to keep from rolling his eyes. If Henry only knew.

Then Max shifted, settling Bonnie more comfortably in his arms. Tally seemed to collect herself at that. She waved to the upholstered seat across from her. “Please, lay your little girl down. And have a seat as well.”

She glanced from his daughter to the conductor. Anywhere but at him it seemed. “I know you’re not a porter, but would it be possible to get a blanket for Bonnie?”

The conductor touched the brim of his hat. “I’ll see to it right away. And if there is anything else I can do to make this new seating arrangement more comfortable for the three of you please let me know.”

Max hesitated, not sure he was truly welcome. But another fretful movement from Bonnie settled the matter. He took the seat across from Tally, laying Bonnie gently down with her head in his lap. “I know you and I didn’t leave things on the best of terms when we were last together.” A definite understatement. That eyes-blazing declaration that she hated him had been the last words she’d spoken directly to him before today. “But I’m very grateful that you’re doing this for Bonnie.”

She folded her hands in her lap. “Your daughter is an innocent and she’s suffering. I wouldn’t be so cruel as to turn her away.”

Her tone and cold look said that the characterization of innocent didn’t extend to him. It seemed she still hadn’t forgiven him.

“You look good Tally, all grown up. I wouldn’t have recognized you as that gangly, freckle faced girl I remember.” This poised, graceful, fashionable woman was nothing like the little tomboy who used to follow him and her older brother around with sometimes annoying persistence, wanting to be included even when her presence wasn’t welcome.

She smiled, though it didn’t extend to her eyes. “No one’s called me Tally since I left Windflower.” A shadow crossed her face. She was no doubt remembering Jamie, the one who’d given her the nickname.

“Would you prefer Talulla?” he asked quickly. “Or Miss Alden perhaps?”

She waved a hand. “Tally’s fine.”

He leaned back, careful not to jostle Bonnie, and studied her a moment as she fiddled with a chain at her neck, her gaze once more focused elsewhere. Max finally decided it was up to him to carry the conversation. “So what takes you home after all these years?”

She tucked a tendril behind her ear, her expression closed off, just short of hostile. “There’s an heirloom I’m supposed to inherit on my twenty second birthday, which happened this week. My father is holding it hostage until I come to personally collect it.”

Good for Rupert. “Then let me offer you a belated happy birthday. And I’m sure your father will be happy for the opportunity to see you again, whatever the reason.” He couldn’t resist adding “It’s been some time since you were last home, hasn’t it?”

Tally’s eyes narrowed at that.


I hope you enjoyed this sneak peak into
Talulla. Leave a comment with your thoughts to be entered in a drawing for a copy of Talulla, to be delivered once it goes live.

 

Talulla

TALULLA

Talulla

Will returning home bring Talulla the peace that’s eluded her for half her life?

Ten-year-old Talulla watched in horror as her beloved brother fell through the ice while trying to save her. Thanks to the quick actions of Max, her brother’s closest friend, she survived. Her brother didn’t. 

When she overhears Max and her father discussing that she’s to blame, Talulla feels betrayed by those she thought she could most trust. A boarding school becomes her refuge, and she never looked back. Until now.

Widowed father Max is traveling home with his young daughter. Unfortunately, a bad case of travel sickness overtakes the little girl, and Max turns to the conductor for help. When the man finds a passenger willing to share her Pullman section, Max is relieved—until he discovers their benefactor is Talulla, a woman whose last words to Max were an impassioned I hate you.

Can these two find a way to push past their mutual distrust to regain the friendship they once shared. And perhaps something more…

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17 Comments on Seekerville: The Journey Continues: Talulla

  • kaybee
    on July 21, 2022 | 09:04 kaybeesaid :
    "Winnie, what a great idea. I like the concept of collaborating with other authors. The creative energy must have you all bouncing off the walls -- and how about the fact that you're all part of something bigger? Also, Trains Are Fun.
    Is it the same "matchmaking conductor" or a different one for each book?
    Nice job in the opening. It's like a Meet NOT Cute.
    Kathy Bailey
    Your Kaybee
    Staying cool in New Hampshire
    "
  • AA Haynes
    on July 21, 2022 | 11:06 AA Haynessaid :
    "Wow! Multi-author projects sound so fun. Thanks for the insider info on how they work. And thanks for the excerpt. Talulla will be great!"
  • Jan Drexler
    on July 21, 2022 | 11:28 Jan Drexlersaid :
    "This series sounds like so much fun, Winnie! And to bring an old story idea to life for it must be so satisfying. :-)

    I'm putting this on my TBR list right now!"
  • Winnie Griggs
    on July 21, 2022 | 12:52 Winnie Griggssaid :
    "Hi Jayvee. Yes it's the same conductor, it is one of the unifying threads in our books. We figure he had a 20 year career on that rail line so we could each pick the time frame we wanted and still be good 🙂
    And LOL I like that "meet NOT cute""
  • Winnie Griggs
    on July 21, 2022 | 12:55 Winnie Griggssaid :
    "Autocorrect got me, but why in the world would it change Kaybee to Jayvee???"
  • Winnie Griggs
    on July 21, 2022 | 13:00 Winnie Griggssaid :
    "You are quite welcome, glad you enjoyed it 😊"
  • Winnie Griggs
    on July 21, 2022 | 13:00 Winnie Griggssaid :
    "Thanks Jan!"
  • Debby Giusti
    on July 21, 2022 | 16:52 Debby Giustisaid :
    "You hooked me, Winnie! The except pulled me in and made me want to read more! Great job!"
  • kaybee
    on July 21, 2022 | 17:23 kaybeesaid :
    "Maybe I'm supposed to try out for the junior varsity team. There's always hope..."
  • Winnie Griggs
    on July 21, 2022 | 20:46 Winnie Griggssaid :
    ":)"
  • Winnie Griggs
    on July 21, 2022 | 20:46 Winnie Griggssaid :
    "Thanks Debby"
  • Winnie Thomas
    on July 22, 2022 | 02:24 Winnie Thomassaid :
    "Hi Winnie (my name twin)! Thanks for the info about your multi-author series. It's such a fun concept. Congratulations on your new release. It sounds so intriguing. It's going on my TBR/wish list! "
  • Lucy Reynolds
    on July 22, 2022 | 08:35 Lucy Reynolds said :
    "What an interesting concept. I’m hooked on reading more. Thank you for sharing. Blessings "
  • Mindy Obenhaus
    on July 22, 2022 | 09:27 Mindy Obenhaussaid :
    "I LOVE that cover, Winnie! The purple is very eye-catching."
  • Erica Vetsch
    on July 22, 2022 | 11:34 Erica Vetschsaid :
    "Congratulations on your new release!"
  • Edwina E Cowgill
    on July 22, 2022 | 12:33 Edwina E Cowgillsaid :
    "This book sounds wonderful and I'd love to win a copy!"
  • Connie Porter Saunders
    on July 22, 2022 | 20:54 Connie Porter Saunderssaid :
    "Congratulations! This book sounds wonderful and I love the cover. Would love to win a copy."
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